While I enjoyed this PSA, there are always ways to make things better. A few things that I may change about this PSA is adding more to the script because the announcer appears to get cut off. The announcer never mentions where the other kids come from and it looks like it was missing from the script. I think it would make a stronger message to add where the other kids come from. I think that both the kids should be coming from their neighborhoods and hook up.
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